Original Oratory SUBMISSIONS

The Conviction in Courage: Finding the Balance Between Fear and Risk

JUDGES FEEDBACK:

JUDGE 1: “Great beginning to attract attention. Good delivery and tone. Good stories relating back to Quranic examples. Really powerful speech, keep it up!”

JUDGE 2: “Great Great delivery. Awesome content. No real critiques. Really enjoyed the whole thing.”

TRUSTING THE PROCESS: CONTENTMENT THROUGH ADVERSITY

JUDGES FEEDBACK:

JUDGE 1: “The overall delivery was very captivating and the content was structured well. The piece had a nice flow and I really enjoyed your performance!”

JUDGE 2: “Amazing speech. Very clear beginning, middle and end. Loved the stories and examples. Good use of pauses throughout to add more effect. It was clear and concise and easy to follow along. The use of personal anecdote in the beginning really hooked me in, and there was nice transitions to the rest of your speech. For the future, try and vary the volume a bit more here and there, but the emphasis on certain words throughout was still understood. Good ending and connecting to the audience, and reminding us Allah hears us, and connecting back to your personal life. MashaAllah, keep up the good work”

TRUSTING THE PROCESS: CONTENTMENT THROUGH ADVERSITY

JUDGES FEEDBACK:

JUDGE 1: “The beginning was very captivating and thank you for being so vulnerable and sharing your experiences with us!”

JUDGE 2: “MashaAllah, amazing speech. Loved the intro and your conclusion, and the unique and format with its repetition. Your speech didn’t come alive just when you spoke, but also in its very structure. Thank you for taking us down your journey, it was clear and followed a logical step by step understanding of your progression. Please keep it up inshaAllah :)”